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Wednesday, December 7, 2011

The bee-ginning of a love story

There were myriad emotions running through her as she decided to take a long walk down the valley. Anger dominated them all, leaving her drained and resentful. On an impulse, she entered the Bee-yard, hoping that the beekeeper would let her channel this destructive streak.
He knew she was coming before he spotted her. A primal instinct drove his eyes towards her. She seemed agitated, but all he could notice was her blinding aura.He must have looked stupid in his standstill position with bees swarming all around him.


She approached him, and stared. He saw her lips forming four musical words.
“You have beautiful eyes!”
He felt the clouds parting, washing him in sun rays. He smiled as he answered,
“I know. After all, beauty lies in the eyes of the bee-holder.”

She took up a stick and started beating the hives, all the while looking into his mesmerising eyes.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hilarious !! ROTFL !!! :)

antbrain said...

Hahaha!! Parting clouds, washing rays and smacking craze! Whacky!

Archana said...

Thank you thank you!

myuntamedmind said...

very beautifully written! is this part of a series or a stand-alone piece?

Archana said...

Thanks! I cannot write stories to save my life; hence I make up sarcastic ones which get over before someone realises I cannot really write.

myuntamedmind said...

That's tough to believe! You could write great stories I think!